The Panther Post features Primavera students with a love for the arts. To kick off this series, we’re sharing an inspiring piece from the Book Club.
“This piece was inspired by a good friend who, unfortunately, passed away last year at the age of 15.”
– Carolina Duran, Age 16, 11th grade
Friend
“Did he look at me?”
I ask you with glee
You shake your head with a knowing smile
“This will only last for while”
You assured me about that last time
“My parents don’t understand!”
I say as I kick the sand
You nod your head filled with wisdom
“No parent ever does, it’s part of the system”
But you did understand that I needed time
As I cried over a broken heart
You stood by my side and played the part
As I regretted my time with him
You listened to my words
I thank you for your intelligence
For your patience and your wisdom
The time you spent with me
And the words you said to me
Now as I think about you
And all you did for me
How your friendship saved me
How you rescued me when I needed it
but I realize I can no longer say this to you
Since all I have left are your lessons taught:
Still, I am grateful to have been your friend
We want to hear from you!
Whether you like to write or have a passion for another form of art, your work can be featured on our Panther Post.
To apply, email [email protected] and include a brief description of your artwork or piece, a few sentences letting us know more about yourself and anything else that can tell the story of your masterpiece!
- Tell us what you think about Carolina’s poem in the comments below!
Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us, Carolina! I know that many of us can identify with losing a loved one too soon. I’m so glad that you had such a wonderful friend to stand by you and this poem is a great tribute to her memory. Keep writing! You’re awesome 🙂
Go Carolina! “Still, I am grateful to have been your friend” Your poem speaks to me on many levels!
This is a very touching piece. It can be difficult to put these kinds of things into words but you pulled it off very well. I think your friend have been proud!
Thank you everyone for your support and comments! 🙂
This is a Wonderful Poem, Carolina ; It evokes feelings from the,reader & sounds very personal, a life story that actually happened to you, one that many of us can relate to. Beautiful.
This is a wonderful poem
What a beautiful tribute to your friend, Carolina! Thank you for sharing your experience with us. Please, keep on writing!
Amazing poem Carolina! c: I love that it comes from a very emotional place.
I would love to contribute! Only problem is, I’m not allowed to own a personal e-mail. I have to use my parents e-mail address for anything I might need. And I doubt they would let me use them for something that isn’t required. Is there any other way I could submit something?
Thank you for your comment, Mariah. We’re excited that you want to contribute. If you are a part of the Book Club, you can submit your work to your club advisor and ask them to submit it to us. We look forward to hearing from you.
Wow! I am so sorry for your loss, but this is truly beautiful! Thank you for sharing!