This month, we’re excited to feature a thriller romance short story written by 11th grade student Makayla Inere. In addition to writing fanfiction, Makayla enjoys writing music, swimming and playing video games.
“The inspiration to write this story came from a dream I have had several times. In this dream I was the main female character falling for a strange yet charming young vampire while fighting to defend myself against other creatures. This story is not yet finished as I plan to write a part three and four to finish up their journey and see what becomes of the end.”
– Makayla
Her short story will be split into two parts, and today we’re showing the first part of the story. Check it out below!
The Vampire’s Love Leads to Death by Makayla Inere
The day I was born, my parents knew that I was never going to be the perfect daughter that they had so badly desired; so they abandoned me. As the night had passed, they only left me with a blanket, a note, and some milk. One night a tribe had found me and they knew that I was not human, but a half blood. I was half vampire and I was proud of who I was even as a baby.
The chief of the tribe took me back to their huts as I knew that they were halfblooded too. I wasnโt sure how I knew, but I could sense it, somehow. As their tribe decided that I was no threat, they revealed their true form to me; they were indeed wolves. Though vampires and werewolves were naturally enemies, I was too young at the time to understand the legends.
As I matured, my thirst for blood strengthened as well, the chief knew that I was ready to start hunting. Once my strength had reached its full potential, it became easier than they had anticipated. Blood became easier to find because my mind could sense living creatures and could smell the sweet scent from miles away. The moment I smelled it, it was harder to draw my attention away from it.
On my seventeenth birthday, I escaped the celebration and pushed myself far away from the tribe. I could hear my thoughts better when it was quiet and without any interruptions. The further I got into the woods, the more I felt alone. That was a risk I was willing to take in order for me to figure out who I was. I knew only a few things about myself:
- I was technically an orphan
- I was half immortal
- I was almost fully matured
- There were more people like me out there
- I had unique talents
A sudden movement broke into my thoughts with the breaking of a branch and a light trail of footsteps. One thing that was sure, it was not a wolf. I opened my eyes, jumped up, and shouted, โWhoโs there? Show yourself, before I attack and rip you to shreds anyway.โ
I could hear a light, slow breathing from behind the trees. A boy stepped out and my defenses began to strengthen as I allowed my fangs to elongate. He was not human; he was a full blooded vampire. I hissed.
I took my eyes off him for a second, thinking. Suddenly he dropped to the ground. While taking slow steps backwards, โWho are you and why have you come?โ
โMy name is Chase and I have come to see only who you were. I sensed another presence aside from my clans. I could ask you the same thing, as you are trespassing.โ
The boy had come as a softer presence now that I had known why he had come, but no way had I known that I was indeed trespassing on his clanโs territory. โMy name is moon. I am a half blood,โ I was defensive for a second longer. โYou and your clan best watch yourselves, my tribe is near and will not hesitate to attack.โ
โGood to know that youโre not alone. Did you say tribe? You mean youโre rolling with wolves?โ he didnโt look as frightened as I had thought he would. As frightening as it had seemed, I was glad that he was not afraid, somehow
My eyes shot to the ground where he lay shivering as I ran to him with the speed of a lightning bolt, โAre you okay?โ Chase was paler than he had been before, and colder than a vampireโs body should be. I knew that he was not okay and I had wondered why. If there was one thing I had to do for my own kind, it was help them.
I took out my laser and carved a lower case โtโ like shape into the palm of my hand. After the shape was completed, I propped Chaseโs head holding my palm over his chest, hoping that my powers could handle such a task. The symbol I had drawn meant โstrength.โ It glowed red as my power pushed its way into his chest. He let out a sharp gasp, but remained still.
Slowly backing up, I placed my arm to my side and said Chaseโs name a few times, โChase? Chase are you okay?โ Opening his eyes slowly, he clutched his chest with baring teeth. He was in mass amounts of pain and that I could not take away. I had done the best I could to heal as much of his wounds as I possibly could.
โMy chest, it burns. What have you done to me?โ he lifted up his shirt to see a deep red colored spot on his chest. Chase looked at me horrified. โHow did youโฆ how did you do that?โ
I let my eyes fall to the ground and held up my palm to reveal a black mark that looked like a tattoo. โWhat do you think I did Chase, you should know. Youโre a full blooded vampire, you explain to me how it is possible that I can carve symbols into my skin and use them when needed. I have been able to do this since I was about 10 years old. I am currently 17 years old. I know that every symbol has a meaning, except I am not sure how I know.โ I wasnโt furious, more or less, I was rather scared of myself.
Chase looked at me and hugged me as he saw tears threatening to surface. I was a strong a girl, but sometimes I could not hold in my feelings and I was starting to trust Chase. He was of my kind and I felt safe with him, โIt is possible, but extremely rare to be taken seriously. You have been able to do this for seven years, which means that you are almost fully matured and that is going to be interesting considering everything you have been through. I have heard of stories where these abilities came to life because of an event that impacted the child differently than it would a mortal. I am not scared of you, but I fear something dangerous and I will not let you go up against it alone. I am staying by your side.โ
Part two has been released! Read it here.
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Great Story! Great potential and a very talented writer. Anxious to read Part 2. Wonderful job young lady!!
Thank you grandma! I believe part two will be out either this coming Wednesday or the Wednesday after ๐ I am finally getting to publish some work on a website, one baby step at a time to being published.
That was an incredible piece to read Makayla. I’m eagerly awaiting part two. ๐
Thank you Cody. Part two will be coming soon. I am also planning to write a part 3 and 4.
So is 3 and 4 a separate book, or all they all in one?
Well, this is just a baby step. I am actually going to make this into a chapter book and keep on going, but I will make a shorter version to finish up the Panther Post.
Well I hope that you have fun with it and keep writing amazing material Makayla. ๐
I couldn’t stop writing even if I wanted to Cody!
What video games do you like to play?
I have an Xbox 360 and I play Destiny, BO3, BO2, and Grand Theft Auto 5.
Great Job with this story Makayla! I really liked it even though I am not a big vampire story person. I can’t wait to read the next one and good luck with your book. Also, just wondering what video games you like.
I play the Xbox 360. I like to play Destiny, BO3, BO2, and GTA 5. And part 2 was just released the other day if you have not yet read or heard about it :). Thank you for commenting! I am glad you enjoyed it.
Wow! I really liked this story and I cannot wait to read the next part. Good luck with the book by the way. I have also had a dream that kept coming back to me where I thought to write it down but I never ended up doing it. What made you decide to write yours?
I wrote mine because I express my emotions through writing. I always have since I was little. I experienced some unforgettable things as a child and I soon began to write as that’s what I was good at. So, I wrote this story because I felt the desired to tell a love story, but this is going to be a long book or multiple books. I’m not sure yet.
I wrote mine because I express my emotions through writing. I always have since I was little. I experienced some unforgettable things as a child and I soon began to write as that’s what I was good at. So, I wrote this story because I felt the desired to tell a love story, but this is going to be a long book or multiple books. I’m not sure yet.
Well either way, you have my full support on this and I’m sure many many others support as well. It’s a great thing though that you’re able to write this great. Best of luck with all future parts Makayla ๐
I just want to thank everyone for taking the time to read my story. It means a lot that you did that. Everyone is awesome on here! Thank you again!